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Submitted: January 15
Image Size: 2.6 MB
Resolution: 1320×1919

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Date Taken:Jan 15, 2013, 10:48:30 AM

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Casu and Cottenyby ~ClearAster

Manga & Anime / Traditional Media / Drawings

here, after a long time trying to desing another OC, I can´t resist to make a pair of OC from the Western, here they are: Casu, the boy on the Left and and Cotteny, the Girl on the Right, you´ll hear more about them soon!!!

Critique by ~FaironxHatena Jan 16, 2013, 5:16:16 AM

Let's start with the girl's waist. You need to thicken it a bit! Along with the guy's upper body. Make the hands/fingers longer. You also need to work on the hair..make it more realistic, and flowing. Make it shiny, more straight, whatever. Make me want to touch it :3. Other than this critique, this drawing is very creative. The setting is great, the clothes are very detailed. A lot of originality is pointed out in this picture C:!
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Critique by ~aotsukino32 Jan 15, 2013, 5:25:55 PM

Its colored and shaded very nicely, and the clothes are drawn well, but their feet look kinda funny and the girls stomach is reeeeeaaaalllllyyyyy skinny. I like the idea and the designs, its really creative. Their hair looks really stiff, maybe you should look around and watch some of Mark Crilleys videos on youtube, he has some about how to draw hair and make it look alive and flowy. Other than those things, this was VERY well done, i luv it!

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